Writing



I am in Mr. Graham’s/Miss Scanlon’s group, we have been working on editing our stories. We have wrote a story inspired by Andy Griffiths, we had to write it on a backyard adventure, I did mine on an appliance Olympics, which I wrote about me and a few friends who scare my dog (Ela) and have to find her inside my house. We also wrote stories outside of the groups including: a soldier letter from world war one at Gallipoli, we could chose to be a nurse or a soldier, and we had to write about the goings on at the war. We also wrote a portal story. What we had to-do with that was to make a/some character/s and get them to go through a portal, and somehow get back home. We also did a letter to a company with a complaint, suggestion or just to congratulate them on their great work, I wrote mine to coca-cola in America asking whether they would make a apple, blackcurrant flavoured Fanta. I also asked them to bring in more flavours from around the world. We wrote a story earlier in the year about a trip to somewhere, I wrote a story about a man and his son who went to Mount Kosciusko, Phil the dad gets heat stroke and has to go to hospital. I think that improved in my editing this year so far, when I started and they told us the edit I just scanned over my work and didn’t find anything rung with it but now from being taught to edit properly I can find heaps of mistakes that I would have just missed in the past. I also think that I have improved in my plan writing too I use to write a very simple plan but now I write a complex plan and it keeps the great ideas from escaping my head

Here is the Plan-man:



Here is my Andy Griffiths story:



Here is my Soldier Letter:



Here is my Company Letter: